Okay, guys, this is just a quick post. Here's a few sentences that I want you to are telling. In the comments section correct them for me. Tomorrow, I'll have a full post on show vs tell and I'll answer the questions so you can check to see if you were right.
* She was furious.
* It was a beautiful day.
* He was stressed out.
* Her bedroom was girly.
* His car was a mess.
* It was a dark and stormy night.
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Wednesday, February 17, 2010
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Writing Example Wednesday- Show vs Tell
2010-02-17T07:00:00-05:00
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